I am pleased you have begun to develop your planning. For higher marks:
1) Avoid using issu for presentations and instead use power point or another presentational form because for some reason these are very difficult to read.
2) Costume: Normal clothes means nothing. Could you explain and link to another media text. Also explain what the costumes tell the audience about characters.
2) Story board needs to be developed.
3) Shooting schedule
4) Locations, please take photographs.
5) Choice of lighting design.
Link all aspects of planning to research into other thriller texts, specifically locations, for example you could say how the location of the bedroom, the discover of the body and Tillie's costume are all inspired by the opening to Once Upon a Time in America. For example a claustrophobic space, Eve's appearance and glamour and so on....
I am pleased you have begun to develop your planning.
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1) Avoid using issu for presentations and instead use power point or another presentational form because for some reason these are very difficult to read.
2) Costume: Normal clothes means nothing. Could you explain and link to another media text. Also explain what the costumes tell the audience about characters.
2) Story board needs to be developed.
3) Shooting schedule
4) Locations, please take photographs.
5) Choice of lighting design.
Link all aspects of planning to research into other thriller texts, specifically locations, for example you could say how the location of the bedroom, the discover of the body and Tillie's costume are all inspired by the opening to Once Upon a Time in America. For example a claustrophobic space, Eve's appearance and glamour and so on....
Keep up the good work Louisa, you are an intelligent student and your raw footage of your group's film is very promising.
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